Well, I lived in New Zealand for 2years, and I went to a camp (I cannot possibly remember the name of it) for a week. This camp was the first camp in my life, so I was actually kind of nervous about it. On the other hand, half of my mind was really looking forward to it.
When I first arrived at the camping place, it looked so gigantic that I got scared. Then I went into this marvellous room which was a place I'll be living for a week. "This place is really good. I'm scared. Am I going to do well in this camp? I don't know what to do." I thought. However, this way of thinking changed right away.
It was then when I changed my thoughts. I went to the opening ceremony happening in the enormous gymnasium of the camping place. I saw a lot of students there who were unsure of what to do. I was so relieved that I wasn't the only one that was first time in the camp. I felt so lucky that I could participate in this amazing camp.
To conclude, my first camp experience in New Zealand was such a horror to me because I didn't know anything to do, but I loved this experience because I experienced new things and I'll be comfortable in GLPS too!!!
Good job! I hope that you would enjoy GLPS as much as the first camp you had. Overall, idea was interesting and it read well. However, your English proficiency makes me expect more from your essay. So try hard next time!
ReplyDeleteP.S. Pissed off is the bad word so let’s try not to use this phrase.